Friday, December 5, 2008

The Man Who Could See Elephants


The main problem facing the young man is that he wanted to carve elephants out of stones. For example that he told the old man to teach him to carve elephants. Another example is he wanted to learn more about the elephants so he had to stay to learn for one more year. A third example,is he wanted to carve elephants.For that reason the main problem facing the young man is that he wanted to carve elephants out of stones.

The problem is resolved because the young man stay for one more year.For example he wanted to learn more about the elephants.Another example is that he knew how to carve stones.A third example is the old man do not carve elephants he imagine.For that example the young man stay for one more year.

I think the young man will sale elephants for the future.For example he liked elephants.Another example is that he wanted to stay to learn about the elephants.A third example
For many months, he went to quarry early every morning with the old man. They spent the whole day there, hammering and chiseling away at the stone.For that reason i think the young man will sale elephants for the future.

7 comments:

Tammy 605 said...

Dear mariyamo

i like your Blog post because your story was good and it was really interesting. The best part your essay is the first paragraph it had a lot of details. One suggestion is nothing it was so good

Sincerely
Tammy Bernardez

Isatou 605 said...

Dear Mariayamo

I love your story because you answered all of the question that the story told you to do.the best part about you story is the you answer the raft questions

Isatou 605 said...

Dear Mariayamo

I love your story because you answered all of the question that the story told you to do.the best part about you story is the you answer the raft questions

Isatou 605 said...

Dear Mariayamo

I love your story because you answered all of the question that the story told you to do.the best part about you story is the you answer the raft questions

Mahamadou 605 said...

dear, maraima i like story cause it have a lot picture matches with your story and when you gave detials. sincrely mahamadou

Amy 605 said...

Dear Mariyamo,
I like your story because yuor picture is nice.

The best part of your essay is your details.

Sincerely Amy ortiz

Kelvin 605 said...

Dear mariamo

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces